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I have met the girl of my dreams,
She sits opposite me in my class,
She has the most beautiful eyes I have ever seen,
Like the brightest of a church’s stained glass.

Her hair always shimmers so enchanting in the light,
Like clear water rippling in the sun,
And her gorgeous red lips fill me with so much delight,
Because the girl of my dreams has come!

She is kind, funny, charming I’m sure!
A woman of so much appeal,
That she often makes me pinch myself ‘til I’m sore,
So I can remind myself that she is real.

I cannot believe that life has seen fit,
To bless me with such a chance,
As to offer me this beauty; this angel as a gift,
So we can enjoy the pleasures of romance.

So carpe diem! I’ll make her my own,
All my worldly desires will come true,
And I will throw my caution to the winds that have blown,
If it means spending my lifetime with you.
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I wrote this when I had a little crush on someone, but she never knew.
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Mood: Love ~Chelseabrooks Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I could figure out how to add this to my favorites
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~Puddha1988 Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There should be a button on the right that says favourite :)
I'm glad you like it
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=I-drew-a-pokemon Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's so Optimistic! How can someone not love it!
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~Puddha1988 Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thanks :)
Maybe it might have worked if I'd shown her, but alas I never could work up the courage! :( lol
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~Gale-OneOfMany Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Been there. Lost that. Lol. Very nicely written though, captures the feelings quite nicely :)
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~Puddha1988 Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks pal :)
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~dragondave10 Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is good. I wish that you would have told her though. It would have been better.
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~Puddha1988 Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks pal, I often wish I had, but could never work up the courage lol
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~dragondave10 Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Join the club. Welcome
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